Saturday, November 15, 2008

Leaves You Spellbound

Blue is that hue
that resonates within:
the soul, the marrow, the sinew
Light trickles from above
leaves take the cue
and before I know it, cripes,
this actually rhymes!


survival by said...

kick ass good
my only suggestion is to take the soundtrack off and add something
from the likes of brian eno. or something very sparse and almost chime like, then this will get a 'vast' feeling
quite something PS, way to do
1 aka 2 aka 3

Pramshanks said...

Yeah, that's true, actually is better without current soundtrack. Will try what you said.

Short Statured feels the current soundtrack gives it a surreal feel, by the way.